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希望大家盡力指出我錯處狠心批改,不必留情.並且希望說明錯的原因感謝I'm back!Hello, I am back. It is 6 o'clock now and I just barely return to my home. I am very happy in last two weeks because I can see many relations of mine and my old friends. My hometown has changed a lot, from past many village to now a lot of flats... 顯示更多 希望大家盡力指出我錯處 狠心批改,不必留情. 並且希望說明錯的原因 感謝 I'm back! Hello, I am back. It is 6 o'clock now and I just barely return to my home. I am very happy in last two weeks because I can see many relations of mine and my old friends. My hometown has changed a lot, from past many village to now a lot of flats and shops. Also, my friends take me to eat many special food which is very delicious. These are a lot of things to tell you, but I need to clean my home due to dust. Thus, see you tomorrow!!
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I'm back! (Don't repeat) Hello(Hello is not good in here, so just use 'I am back'), I am back. It is 6 o'clock now and I just barely(barely is incorrect here, so use 'does') return to my home. I am very happy in last two weeks because I can see many relations of mine and my old friends. My hometown has changed a lot, ('.' is better here)from past(we don't use 'from past' we use 'in the old days') many village(put "s"!!!) to now(Full stop, and then say 'Now'. This sentence makes sense if you follow) a lot of flats and shops. Also, my friends take me to eat many special food('s'!!!) which is very delicious. These are(Not 'these are' should be 'there are'!) a lot of things to tell you, but I need to clean my home due to dust(no need 'due to dust'). Thus, see you tomorrow!!
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希望大家盡力指出我錯處狠心批改,不必留情.並且希望說明錯的原因感謝I'm back!Hello, I am back. It is 6 o'clock now and I just barely return to my home. I am very happy in last two weeks because I can see many relations of mine and my old friends. My hometown has changed a lot, from past many village to now a lot of flats... 顯示更多 希望大家盡力指出我錯處 狠心批改,不必留情. 並且希望說明錯的原因 感謝 I'm back! Hello, I am back. It is 6 o'clock now and I just barely return to my home. I am very happy in last two weeks because I can see many relations of mine and my old friends. My hometown has changed a lot, from past many village to now a lot of flats and shops. Also, my friends take me to eat many special food which is very delicious. These are a lot of things to tell you, but I need to clean my home due to dust. Thus, see you tomorrow!!
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I'm back! (Don't repeat) Hello(Hello is not good in here, so just use 'I am back'), I am back. It is 6 o'clock now and I just barely(barely is incorrect here, so use 'does') return to my home. I am very happy in last two weeks because I can see many relations of mine and my old friends. My hometown has changed a lot, ('.' is better here)from past(we don't use 'from past' we use 'in the old days') many village(put "s"!!!) to now(Full stop, and then say 'Now'. This sentence makes sense if you follow) a lot of flats and shops. Also, my friends take me to eat many special food('s'!!!) which is very delicious. These are(Not 'these are' should be 'there are'!) a lot of things to tell you, but I need to clean my home due to dust(no need 'due to dust'). Thus, see you tomorrow!!
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